That was a great start. Character models were good. Story seems interesting.
Damn, I don't know whether to see that as a good or bad thing these days.This game reminds me a lot of Being a DIK. Great first release and it has huge potential
I just assume all comparisons are good. It's way less stressful that wayDamn, I don't know whether to see that as a good or bad thing these days.
. I also reworded the description. Hopefully the premise is more obvious and less confusing now. Let me know what you think!I have a question:
When the game starts, the player is asked the relationship with Lianna (Sephora's mom). Even if the relationship is changed from host to any other, the next screens where Lianna reponds, the text still says host - should it not change as per the relationship mentioned in the beginning? Remveer
Spellcheck: "...... as you have never met your father"
When the game starts, the player is asked the relationship with Lianna (Sephora's mom). Even if the relationship is changed from host to any other, the next screens where Lianna reponds, the text still says host - should it not change as per the relationship mentioned in the beginning? Remveer
Spellcheck: "...... as you have never met your father"
Thanks for pointing this out. It was caused by variables not working together as I believed they would. Turns out I was overcomplicating things and it was an easy fix. both issues should be fixed in the next full release. Appreciate you!
There seem to be more spell checks required. I will run the same through and let you know regarding spell checks
Thanks
If You aren't on VC1E1.001 you may want to download that one quickly. It doesn't have the fixes you pointed out But it does have some bugfixes and quite a few spelling and grammar fixes. That way you're not wasting your time pointing out mistakes that have already been fixed. Thank you for your help!
Id suggest downloading the latest version then if you plan on proofreading more (You totally don't have to I'm more than thankful for the help you've already given) . I'm sure I missed more spelling and grammar mistakes. but I've fixed the ones that were brought to my attention
It was mostly the image types I didn't even think about size and was using PNG's. I'm looking for the sweet spot when converting them to a smaller image type now. Want to compress them as much as possible without losing too much detail.
Eh it's kind of a run-on sentence but grammar issues aside, you've made it very clear now for other potential dumbasses like me lol. Thanks for being so chill about it.I just assume all comparisons are good. It's way less stressful that way
If you ever need some advice, there's a guy who does proofreading. Coincidentally, he was one of the first people to comment on the thread.
There's also another guy who takes commissions for proofreading.
Or obviously, I'm down to give you some feedback as well. I just figure it'd be better to go to more experienced people and not someone who feels like he's talking out of his ass. LOL.
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Truly we are in the era of American football AVN games soon enough it will have its own tag
There's no plans for her currently. Doing a non cannon fantasy scene with her sometime in the future could be on the table though if there's enough interest.
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huuuuge bummer. but it is what it is.
honestly a fantasy of her would bum me out even more since it'll be likes somthing that could've happened but never will.
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If you have no plans with some girls in the game you should make them ugly or don't have those girls at all.
The problem is everyone's definition of ugly is different. Even if I made her absolutely busted someone is going to be disappointed that she's not getting a scene with the MC. On the other hand If I don't give Montez someone to chase, anytime he interacts with any of the MC's love interest people are gonna be worried about NTR (some still might). It's a lose lose unfortunately.
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Naah. I'm pretty sure you can come up with ugly chicks who will be ugly for most of the guys.
Why should Montez's sex life be MC's business or headache? It's MC's game. Montez can live a sexless life for all I care. We players don't really care about his sex life.
Will it make any difference to the story if montez doesn't chase anyone?
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Establishing from the start that those two are an item you made the right choice, mate.
Keep up the good work :beers: